Help me with my english homework?

Help me with my english homework?

Hi! my name is andrea, I'am from Peru, i have an english

homework, can you teel me if this is correct? :

Children in the future

In the future, parents will choose how their babies are going to be, they will choose the color of the hair, eyes and skin.

In the future, When the children have 1 year, they will go to the school, when they have 12 years they will go to university.

In the future, children will be very intelligent because they will drink a juice which will make them more intelligent

If you add to this paragraph more things or you correct it I will be very happy (:

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